Everybody's saying the same thing
That the narration needs work. And it does, both in the writing and the speaking. But besides that, your art style is fun and matches the story well, and I dig mythology anyway.
Everybody's saying the same thing
That the narration needs work. And it does, both in the writing and the speaking. But besides that, your art style is fun and matches the story well, and I dig mythology anyway.
I have to ask
Did this make front page ONLY for Poogrounds day? 'cause that would be understandable...
Funny stuff
You would have gotten a 10 for animation anyway, but "You know what happens when I run!" Takes it to a whole new level. A level filled with awesome.
You know what?
I bet it's even better if you're high? No, really. I suggest someone try it. I think the author already has . . .
You're Chad.
And that's why . . .
. . . we have Lutherans. I love this series.
You get a ten...
...for the credits song. Otherwise the randomness level is lower in this one, which was great, I like how you incorporated some semblance of a plot.
You asked...
...for favorite monsters. I have 2: the angler fish with the teeth, & the one with the Turkey gobble that took me back to AOE II.
Only thing to improve is the quantity of sound effects. Quantity, not quality. For instance, when the tentacle smashes Prof. Scarrow, it's completely silent.
Well...
The beginning was much better made than the end. And I don't just mean the presence and absence of background. Overall, though, a decent piece
A side note: I believe Chaucer based his first Tale (loosely) off these fellows.
Another side note: LOTRO Soundtrack. NOT LOTR. Two different things.
Not bad
Weird to see an ANTI-violence cartoon on Newgrounds, but don't get me wrong you have a good message in this.
The thing is, the song did most of the talking. Everybody is critiquing the animation in these reviews, but I think they're too preoccupied with the technical stuff. I just wonder if maybe there could have been a little more development. Also, the jet bombing them seemed kind of cheap; that is, why have this long story, without any allusion to imminent threat, and then a long shot ofthe jet coming in, withoutreferencingthe story? I don't know, man...aproject on this kindof topic shouldbe a little more cinematic.
Huh...I didn't really mean to go smashing up your work, because overall you did get me thinking, so good job.
thanks, good to see that it made you think. originally the jet part was going to be much more cinematic but then the move to Austria rushed up and i really had to get it finished and out there before i moved so the jet sequence really ended up just getting slimmed down. I'm not happy to see the expanded version go but you live and you learn...
Rock On
Lol "B+"! Been there... Really good use of music, and great ending. Keep it up.
Wow I need to upload some stuff when I get the chance.
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